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The Loser

There was a guy who was a real loser Only because he was quite a boozer. He'd drink and drink and drink all day Then he'd drink the night away. He could not keep a job because of his habit Always blaming something else, as he drank about it. He would talk at the bar as he was a real gab Couldn't pay for his drinks, so they kept a tab. After losing a job for the fourth or fifth time He almost went into a life of crime. He didn't know how to get out of this hole And always seemed to be on the dole. One night on his way to another bar He heard some singing from a church not far. The music enticed him for a look see Imagine his surprise at inside there who'd be. It was a young girl, maybe nine or ten He hadn't seen her since he could remember when. Her angelic face was one of the keys With her sweet voice...brought him to his knees. He knew at once he was being shamed By a power so great, now only he himself could be blamed. For there was the Lord asking him, "Why, Did his little girl come to the church and cry?" The quiet words that a child implored Heard up in heaven, by the Almighty Lord. It was that moment when grace grasped him Shook him awake, to recognize his sin. After that night he cleaned up his act For with the Lord he had made a pact. From now on, sober would he be And his daughter again, her father would see. For the Lord had heard the prayers of this little child Turned to her father, making him timid and mild. Many years went by as then these two Once again, into a family grew. He found a job that he worked for the next twenty years Thanking God each night, as he fought back the tears. So, if there is something that you need in your life Put it in the hands of the Almighty, Who alone can calm your strife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/26/2010 6:55:00 AM
This is in line for a great ballad ... wonderful story line too. Keep the faith, my friend. One love
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:09:00 PM
This is such a beautiful inspiring story and poem. I loved reading it tonight. Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/24/2010 12:39:00 AM
oh, you took a story that I have heard often from familes at our church and how some thing like this turns them around. Great message poem, Daniel. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:53:00 AM
There is so much emotion in the story behind this poem, Daniel. You must have a lot of faith to write such a poem about the inspiration for the transition in this man's life. I'm so glad you gave us a happy ending. Too often people like this man never find a way to make positive changes. Very sincere and genuinely moving poem. Take care, Diane
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Date: 9/23/2010 7:17:00 AM
You may have been writing about a fictional person, Daniel, but so many people who feel like "losers" become winners once they find comfort in God's grace. It seems this little girl truly was an angel capable of producing a miracle and turning this man's life around. A beautifully written poem with a terrific message, Daniel. I admire your faith! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:07:00 PM
Daniel, this poem brought tears to my eyes, how beautifully written it is, and filled with emotion, just wonderful.. and thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:48:00 AM
Great advice given in this flowing poem that is descriptive and expressive..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:33:00 AM
Du hast dies mit Deinen Worten gut eingefangen! Sehr gut geschrieben!...All the best, Gert
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:38:00 AM
A nice story and nice characterization of the guy who was loser, Danieal
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:52:00 PM
wonderfully inspireing piece
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