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The Look

It started with just a simple look A gaze that melted my insides It made my knees weaken so That I could barely stand How on earth could eyes Sear so deeply Into me Desire Hmm? © Copyright Donna Golden November, 2008

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Date: 8/15/2011 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Donna. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/1/2011 12:25:00 PM
Good one..It worked really well in this form..Sara
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Date: 11/17/2008 8:48:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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