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The Longing

On a day where the sky is so brilliantly blue, my thoughts are directed only toward you To feel the sun and the wind on my face, and your hand in mine as we stroll about this place The light shimmers on the water so radiant, so clear, like my soul longing to have you near The reflection of you I can see everywhere, as my heart cries out because I do so care The breeze on my face reminds me of how time has passed, of how you are growing and how it has been so fast Your life has changed beyond measure and so has mine, but we can never go back and we can't ever change time Our hearts know that we are connected as one, a father and his daughter separated... but never undone My arms may be empty because you are not here, though you are my greatest love... you never have to fear As I sit by the water and watch a sunset unfold, you are with me always... the truth has been told We will see many sunsets which dance off the water because of the love of a father and his daughter Now, as the sun drifts lower to meet the night, I watch in humbled awe at its spectacular sight Then my soul renews its faith in the glory above, for a father and his daughter longing yet forever... bonded in love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/30/2015 6:51:00 PM
George, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
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George Aul
Date: 7/1/2015 9:37:00 AM
Thank you as always for your kind words......... George
Date: 6/28/2015 10:10:00 AM
This is so sweet, congratulations!
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George Aul
Date: 6/29/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thank you and also congrats to you also....... George
Date: 6/28/2015 1:00:00 AM
George, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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George Aul
Date: 6/29/2015 10:31:00 AM
Thanks once again for the opportunity....... George
Date: 6/27/2015 6:18:00 AM
the saddest time for any father is the day he entrusts his treasured daughter into another man's hands yet it is also his greatest for one day he will hold his grandchildren and teach them life's meaning. fine tribute George Congrats on placing hugs
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George Aul
Date: 6/27/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thank you for the very kind words....... George
Date: 4/25/2011 8:14:00 PM
George, this one is wonderful. What a lucky daughter to have a dad write a poem like that for her. my dad would probably not even READ one of mine let alone write me one himself! Glad I rean out of poems of yours to see in front and found this gem in the back!
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Date: 1/10/2011 3:51:00 PM
oh! wow. George. you have such a beautiful start here.. and the ending is like magic.. awe.. to your wonderful poem.. take care... Linda
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