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The Longest Journey

I watch the steam, roll over the train, as we round the bend. It appears and disappears, like the dark cloud that has imprisoned my heart, since reading of your death. The rattle from the windows keeps me in a hypnotic state, as I'm still fifty miles away. Received a letter three weeks after you departed, now alone and dazed I've taken this train, to your grave This contraption moves ever slow, and the noise from screeching wheels, when we stop for water, awakens me. There's nothing more timeless then motion, that seems to stand still. Steam engines...I should have taken a horse. At least I wouldn't have all this time to remember. Clickety Clack...Clickety Clack... All aboard...Last stop To never see you again, my final heartbreak. If you don't mind I'm taking a horseback, so I can forget the sadness, leave it on the train. I'll visit your grave with a smile, placing your favorite flowers against the headstone. And watch the train roll past the graveyard, while its whistle tries to awaken dad, who lies next to you. You'll never be alone again... and me..you taught me to be strong, I can do no less than honor your memory. 1/5/15 contest Railway Journeys

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Date: 2/1/2015 1:57:00 PM
FREDERIC, CONGRATULATIONS on your RAILWAY JOURNEY win *ALWAYS* SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2015 11:07:00 PM
Emotive write again Frederic! Congrats on super win!
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Date: 1/26/2015 5:52:00 AM
A sad ride... As always well written... congrats on your win... nad!
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:00:00 AM
Lovely old memories nicely penned, congrats on the win
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:47:00 PM
beautifully penned heartbreaking write - many congrats Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:25:00 PM
Frederic , love your descriptive heartbreaking story, congratulations on your win, and 7. Blessings eve
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Date: 1/25/2015 1:48:00 PM
congrats on placing Fred a very touching pen hugs
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:17:00 PM
how deep can this get with touches of contemplation... you move me, frederic!.. huggs
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Date: 1/5/2015 7:17:00 PM
This is an exceptional and moving piece. I'm glad I stopped by this evening. I suspect this journey will arrive at the winners podium.
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Date: 1/5/2015 6:36:00 PM
The hard task -- living strong . . . honoring memories. Well done good friend.
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