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The Long Wait

soft moonlight kisses her cheek cool night air gives a caress she stands alone in shadow some day he will come for Tracie's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/18/2011 11:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Steven. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2011 8:51:00 PM
I love this one, Steven. Is this contest already judged? I see you posted this a while back. Thanks for your comment today. Luv, Andrea
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Steven Mossburg
Date: 11/13/2011 1:34:00 PM
It was judged awhile back. It was for the Doditsu contest in which your poem (Hopeless Romantic") tied for first. This was my first and only Doditsu. I will have to try some more soon. It was fun and challanging to write. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 11/12/2011 7:38:00 PM
and he'll be a werewolf in disguise....ha ha. Just kidding..... I do like the waiting for the perrrrfect one to come along. Nature is entertaining her until "he" arrives. Enjoyed, Steven. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:42:00 PM
great dodoitsu p.d.
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