The Long Twilight

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Twilight seems infinite Sleep ain't comin' For this night owl Date written and posted: 04/17/2016

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/30/2016 2:46:00 PM

Lovely and so precised to the heart with a very good linking understanding to the mind. A definite 7

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/3/2016 12:11:00 PM

Thanks, Funom. Glad you liked it...

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 4/18/2016 7:58:00 AM

Sorry Edward, another lack of sleep slip of mine!! I should probably just work a 3rd shift job being I'm at night most of the time! You are nice and good luck with your poems!:)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/18/2016 8:43:00 PM

There I go again, I meant to say being I'm up at night….Sorry and hugs back!:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/18/2016 11:36:00 AM

Thanks, Cheryl:) No offense taken, by the way! *hugs*

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 4/17/2016 9:02:00 PM

Hey Lanterne…I can definitely relate to this poem being I'm an insomniac!:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/17/2016 11:12:00 PM

Hi Cheryl! Lanterne is the form for this poem. Don't worry about the mistake, laugh about it!*wink* Sorry to hear you're not getting enough shut eye, though:(