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The long sleep

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I think that there is a lot of deep pain in the world. And at this moment my own depression is Contributing to my thoughts. There are medications to help but there are just Some pain that there is no help for.

Now is the time I think I should close my eyes And sleep for good. The pain I'm in is buried deep so I feel I need Never ending sleep. I'm scared I am not brave but to have this sleep I will be saved To lie down and close my eyes would be the time All my pain dies. Please don't worry I did my best but no pain now And I'm at rest.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 4:13:00 PM

I understand and can relate to that never ending pain, and the overwhelming feeling of putting all your pain to rest with great finality. I admire your powerful words, Paul.