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The Lonely Cloud

I see a lonely cloud in the sky, the only cloud I see in the humid heat; -burning. Before my eyes it shrinks, evaporating into the nothingness, becoming less then vapor; -what is less then vapor? A puff? I melt in the heat and so does the cloud, we are brothers in need, fading away; into the wind- becoming one with a subatomic universe; -we cannot see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/6/2010 6:14:00 PM
This is new. And I LOVE it! Especially the second stanza. Giving you a seven... ;)
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Date: 7/6/2010 5:59:00 PM
well written this is, of a lonely cloud,, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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