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The Lonely Ace of Hearts

Dedication to my first and last love, Lance Ewens, 1979-2006 She's remembering The day that she fell for him It was in Autumn When she first transfixed her eyes Upon the most gorgeous face That she'd ever seen He smiled at her with a charm That glistened so bright It melted her heart like snow They became friends instantly Their friendship would grow And thus, blossom into love They spent every day With each other mirthfully Until that last fateful night A bitter, rough wind Stole her one true love away Her heart always breaks When she holds the ace of hearts It remains a painful token Of the love that she once had Dawn Kilby Copyright ©2008 Dawn Kilby

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Date: 10/12/2008 7:12:00 AM
Hello Dawn, I hope that as with your name, you will always look forward to new beginnings, new sunrises... Remember, but also learn to move on! He'll expect that of you! Take care always! BRgds. George
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Date: 10/10/2008 2:00:00 PM
thanx sharon for your support :P this was also inspired from a photo...first came the photo then the poem...this was a true story.
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Date: 10/10/2008 12:57:00 PM
So sorry for your loss. Again, with poetry never sure how much is truth or imagined. A heartfelt write filled with beautiful memories and sadness. Love, Shar
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