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The Loftiness of Man

So once again, as I often do, I sit and ponder on the loftiness of Man. Great cities he has built - Great are the rising condos - Middle-finger pointing Structures scraping the serene sky. Great bridges spanning greater expanses Deep tunnels through rock And submarine mass. Great thundering trains Or even silently speeding bullet ones. Great is the power Of the drills in the earth Bringing up the essence To do even greater things! Lofty, indeed, is Man Who cares not a whit For the rape of the land. So Great is He that Great plans to relocate ex-Terra are afoot. But when the golden-egg laying goose Is raped unto death, Where lies the Greatness? How lofty is Man?

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Date: 8/7/2016 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations on you intense poem and win.
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Date: 8/7/2016 7:15:00 PM
Karam, congrats on your placement with this wonderful poem :)-luloo
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Date: 8/7/2016 6:47:00 PM
A 7 for this dramatic, thought-provoking WINNING poem, Karam! Janice
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Date: 8/7/2016 11:05:00 AM
Nice write. Enjoyed the read, a great poem for man to reflect upon time and again...Congrats on your win. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/6/2016 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Date: 4/11/2016 1:32:00 PM
Congrats Karam on your wonderful win!
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/11/2016 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, Balveen.
Date: 4/10/2016 11:17:00 PM
Karma, Congratulations on your LOVE OF POETRY win. ~always~ LINDA
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Date: 4/10/2016 11:20:00 PM
Thank you, Linda.
Date: 4/10/2016 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in this contest, well deserved
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/10/2016 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, Brian.
Date: 4/10/2016 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Hugs, Abo
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/10/2016 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Abo. Loved your poem "Will you be my tomorrow"
Date: 4/10/2016 2:28:00 PM
The line that made it necessary to place this poem is "Middle-finger pointing structures scraping the serene sky". It followed me every time I looked at the city skyline. Thanks for entering the contest
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/10/2016 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, John, for considering the poem worthy of honorable mention. Truly encouraging.
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/10/2016 9:59:00 PM
Thank you, John, for considering the poem worthy of honorable mention. Truly encouraging.
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/10/2016 9:58:00 PM
Thank you, John, for considering the poem worthy of honorable mention. Truly encouraging.
Date: 4/10/2016 1:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win Karam
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/10/2016 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 4/10/2016 12:51:00 PM
Karam, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/10/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. Congrats to you, too.

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