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The Locket

The Locket (it’s never too late) She hid in the shadows with tears in her eyes The locket she wore, she had come to despise In dangling silver the shape of a heart What once was a gift now ripped her apart Alone with her feelings, she crept through the night Embracing the darkness, fearing the light Gripping the chain that was cold on her skin Telling herself that she’d never again Open the locket for what was inside Memories that she was now forced to hide Happier times when her hair was so dark Running and playing those days in the park Falling in love at the very first kiss Ice cream on Sundays, those days she would miss Merry go rounds and that big Ferris wheel Moments of joy that she now must conceal For age had come calling, it stood in her way Her once lustrous hair, was a light shade of grey And wrinkles appeared where her beauty once shined Each look in the locket, just served to remind For it held a picture of her in her youth When she was quite young, it presented the proof A gift from her parents who passed long ago She thought to discard it but always said no Her good days were gone, she had left them behind Just knowing that time has eclipsed her to find Someone to love her in this later stage She won’t find affection because of her age While lost in these thoughts, a voice she did hear It seemed that a man had just stepped very near He reached for her arm, oh the fear in her eyes Then he called her by name, when she realized He looked so familiar, someone she did know A face from her past, such a long time ago And then she remembered, when she was a teen He was the most handsome boy she’d ever seen "What are you doing out here in the dark? You know it’s not safe all alone in the park I haven’t seen you for many a year, but now that I do I can see it is clear You’re just as beautiful as so long before When I held the secret that you I adore I kept this photo each day close to me" He took out the photograph so she could see It was the picture now locked in the charm The look on her face showed embarrassed alarm But then she smiled for she had no choice A comfort had come at the sound of his voice "You look no different, I truly must say You’re just as cute as that first high school day When I saw you walk in and decided to wait But here we are now and it’s never too late" She knew she was blushing a bright shade of red For all of the wonderful things he had said Now enjoying the light that shone bright up above She felt very strange, she was falling in love "That’s a beautiful locket you wear on a chain" He reached out and pointed, he didn’t refrain "It must be quite special," he said with a touch She said, "It is special, I love it so much" He then took her hand and off they did go The future was waiting with good things to show She looked at the locket, then up to the sky And whispered a thank you with a tear in her eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/10/2017 10:32:00 AM
I forgot to rate...... I have to wonder if I do that often when reviewing
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Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Lenna and don't worry too much about it with me, I have no idea what the ratings do and I don't pay attention to them, though I do leave ratings on other poets because I'm sure it means something, but I wouldn't even know where to look to see what my rating is. Kind words are always so much more to me than the rating. :)
Date: 5/10/2017 10:31:00 AM
ahh Chris......... This brought a tear. Words fail me at the moment. This is sad, happy, beautiful and so well written. Now I have read the other comments and NO, not one boring thing about this, and I am very impressed ... once again. (I can only hope you never get sick of hearing that) :)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Lenna again and again and I am sure I will never get tired of hearing you say nice things about my poetry. :) Your kindness is something I would never tire of.
Date: 5/9/2017 2:27:00 PM
What is it about lockets, we never know what secrets they hold. Really loved the way your story unfolded in this wonderful write, got to be a seven again!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/10/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Elizabeth. Sorry for my late reply, I must have missed this somehow. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 5/9/2017 4:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful ballad, I'd love to hear you play and sing it for us :) Ow, such a locket.... My friend, this is exquisite and so wonderful, I can't get enough of it, keep reading it. Yet another of you going to my favourites .
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Darren White
Date: 5/9/2017 9:11:00 AM
That's what you always say, but you have a wonderful voice :)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren. I don't really have a melody in mind for this one but I guess I could, though it is a bit too long and I'm sure boredom would set in quickly if I were singing it.
Date: 5/9/2017 3:38:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. Allow me to simply say I have no words for such expression. This is solid in its entirety including well thought out and executed. I can go on but I will spare you. May the locket bring all that is desired and hoped for. And now you Mr. leave a tear with this reader for the beauty and thought of it all.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thanks my friend for everything you do. I appreciate your comments and your talent. You make soup a wonderful place to write and read.
Date: 5/8/2017 10:58:00 PM
Chris, I don't know if you're a good singer or not, but your verses are certainly melodious; as for your romantic imagination and effortless storytelling, they never cease to amaze me:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie. Am I a good singer...ha, I wish. But if you have time to search for it I have one posted on soup titled "Sunday Morning" that has a link to me singing the song if you'd like to hear for your self. I appreciate your visits my friend and all of the kindness you show.
Date: 5/8/2017 6:46:00 PM
I started to skip this because it was so long, but I am soooo glad I didn't! I started humming "It could happen to you." and wishing it would! LOl Sweet dreams, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 8:32:00 AM
I am happy you stuck through this with me. I know it is long, I was having a hard time reaching a suitable ending and making it somewhat believable. Thank you my friend, I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 5/8/2017 5:55:00 PM
Yay! Wonderful Chris :) xomo!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen. That is exactly what I say every time you visit my poetry. Yay!!!
Date: 5/8/2017 5:52:00 PM
a beautiful and very touching story, chris, told in your magical rhyming way. i thoroughly enjoyed every verse...
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Chris Green
Date: 5/9/2017 8:31:00 AM
Thank you so very much Ilene for your wonderful comment
Date: 5/8/2017 5:23:00 PM
This is such a special poem. I love this story :) Thanks for sharing!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/8/2017 5:30:00 PM
Heidi, your kind words always find a way of touching my heart. Thank you so very much my dear friend. I am thrilled you found this one and enjoyed it.
Date: 5/8/2017 5:04:00 PM
Very beautiful and touching Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 5/8/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 5/8/2017 4:33:00 PM
Reading your beautiful poem..It gave me goosebumps and a sigh.Deserving a favourite.. I can see yr poem being transformed into a movie.Romantic indeed.It is never too late for love.Love knows no age...Its like the ocean-forever young..Awesome.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/8/2017 5:10:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, your kindness is like this story as I find such beauty in everything you write to me. I am so happy you liked this one. I was afraid it might be a bit too long for most on this site. I appreciate you my sweet friend.
Date: 5/8/2017 4:27:00 PM
Oh my ..you never believe this...I scribbledsome lines in my memo area..Its where I write my draft poems manytimes...It started 'Till we meet again'...It is about a locket with a photograph that holds a memory in it...Ha:)..My muse must be in contact with your own..or my spirit ..lol..Now i ll read the poem and comment about it..
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Chris Green
Date: 5/8/2017 5:08:00 PM
That so cool my sweet friend. As they say, great minds think alike. :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/8/2017 4:28:00 PM
Btw..It was about three hrs ago :)

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