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The Locked Room

''Dark things happened there....'' they say, with fading tones, almost reaching their vanishing point, due to unhidden fright. Sometimes they hear eerie moans; see dancing shadows on the space between the door and floor; other times whispers that make them feel as though they will shatter like hollow glass tubes. To stop the haunting, they hired spiritualists to seal the room's door with their divine will. Candles flicker in the night, as voices of the undead wander across the corridors..... Publishing Date: 25/4/2014

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Date: 1/26/2017 10:07:00 AM
Whoa! I really like how you set an eerie stage here. I can feel the glow of the otherworld.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/30/2017 3:30:00 PM
Hehehe. That was the plan.... Thank you Kathleen, for enjoying my work!!! *^_^*
Date: 7/2/2016 1:39:00 AM
A good write on ghost
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2016 5:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my piece, bro!!! ;-)
Date: 7/1/2016 4:46:00 PM
I like this. Congratulations. 'voices wandering across corridors...' Great
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2016 5:57:00 AM
Thanks so much for your applause, Kai!!! ;-)
Date: 4/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
I liked this poem very much, especially those last two lines. Very haunting!... Great work, Teddy and congrats on your win, as well!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2016 5:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Kelly!! *^_^* It's good to hear back from you!!! ***
Date: 3/14/2016 1:15:00 AM
Yes, Candles do flicker... A gem in a poem...Congrats...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/14/2016 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Probir!! :-)
Date: 3/13/2016 10:17:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/14/2016 7:14:00 AM
Hi Linda. Enjoy your moments at the new city. You are sure lucky to visit many places. ;-) Thank you so much for your applause and including my work in your blog!!! *^_^* <3
Date: 11/1/2015 10:46:00 AM
Teddy, Congrats on your Halloween win, hope you had a wonderful one. SKAT love
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/14/2016 7:07:00 AM
Greetings Skat. Yes, I had. Thank you so much for your applause!!! *^_^* <3
Date: 10/29/2015 1:44:00 PM
Teddy, congratulations on placing in the contest. Janice
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/31/2015 12:51:00 AM
Thank you Janice! *^_^*
Date: 10/27/2015 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on superb win Teddy with this amazing write!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/29/2015 2:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause and enjoying my work Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 10/27/2015 8:15:00 PM
Congratson your win...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/29/2015 2:38:00 AM
Thank you Robert! ;-)
Date: 10/27/2015 2:10:00 PM
Teddy :) Congratulations on your Good Old Halloween Poem. Had fun reading every entry. Stop by my latest blog "The Locked Room" in references to this contest if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~The Poet Destroyer~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/29/2015 2:37:00 AM
Thank you Linda! I'm so much humbled! *^_^* <3
Date: 8/17/2015 11:41:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning poem Teddy! Great work!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/29/2015 2:35:00 AM
Thank you very much for your applause and enjoying my work Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 8/16/2015 9:52:00 PM
Teddy, Congrats on your win. ~SKAT~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/29/2015 2:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^* <3
Date: 8/14/2015 7:12:00 PM
Teddy, :) Congratulations on your HM. Stop by my latest blog "Poem for One Victim" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/29/2015 2:33:00 AM
Hi Linda. Can you imagine I was so busy that time I didn't know I won a contest?! Lolest... Thank you for your applause, and wonderful contest!!! *^_^* <3
Date: 4/25/2014 2:31:00 PM
A splendid write Teddy...you should have a part 2 to this one
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/30/2014 8:22:00 AM
Thanks for your applause Joseph. I sure will work on part two soon......

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