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The Locked Green

Of darkest cobalt green
Barred bolted
Contents unseen
I stare


Two small holes
Unlock treasure
Lighting the coals
Of my imagination
I move


By seven feet, does it stand proud
Towering over the madding crowd
With a cobalt green shroud

Three feet wide
With two doors
Getting closer
I pause


It’s guard has come
I scurry back
Peering up to see
The doors now open

Yet all inside is but dead wood
Naught to think
The flame dies
I sit in knowledge

The green doors slam.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2013 3:19:00 AM
    Awesome write Red. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 9:32:00 PM
    Red, Congratulations, with your winning poem. Thank you for supporting my "Green" contest. Always :-) Linda

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:17:00 AM
    amazing, i love it! more like this please