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The Little Match Girl

She sat huddled in an alleyway, frozen to the bone Shivering with the clutch of matches that she sold. She hadn't sold a match, but so longed to go home To warm her naked feet from cobblestone so cold. Shivering, with the clutch of matches that she sold, She lit a match upon the wall to feel its tiny heat To warm her naked feet from cobblestone so cold, But in a moment swiftly, it had spent itself complete. She lit a match upon the wall to feel its tiny heat. Faintly she saw her grandmother, beautiful as life, But in a moment swiftly, it had spent itself complete Escaping from such misery, biting cold and strife Faintly she saw her grandmother, beautiful as life She hadn't sold a match, but so longed to go home. Escaping from such misery, biting cold and strife She sat huddled in an alleyway -- frozen to the bone. Posted: 8/23/2016 Revised: 8/1/2018

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Date: 9/12/2018 10:08:00 AM
Sadly Jesse it is a story played out too often on the harsh streets of cold cities. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 7/31/2018 11:28:00 PM
I see you did one as well. I really like it. It tells a very vivid story in those lines. You made 1 mistake though. The first line of the first verse is to be the last line and the 3rd line of verse 1 is to be the 2nd line of your last verse. A very easy fix though.
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Date: 8/1/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thank you. This style was very new to me and I didn't even notice the mistake. In changing it, though, I decided to revise several of the lines. I like it much better now. Thank you for the prompt.
Date: 8/24/2016 1:36:00 AM
Great last line......... Skat
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