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The Lipsmacking

A restaurant no less than Disney Land With ornamentation of all brands With delicacies and luxuries provided in And the furniture is covered with crocodile's skin Finest ladies visit day and night And on whimsical topics they fight A lot of noise is created And the manager gets very irritated The restaurant is called 'The Lipsmacking' And the chef is no less than Prince Charming He is tall,intelligent and very fair And people like him are very rare But the staff is just the opposite To even serve the dishes they are not fit But they dance and sing and entertain people Inspite if them being so feeble Cuisine is served on shining silverware And the charges are quite fair Pure Veg the restaurant is Sad for the Non-Vegetarians out there Near the river banks it is located Well into the place it is fitted When 'The Lipsmacking' will reach it's fame My happiness will come all over again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/6/2016 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations. I would only change the crocodile skins, because the restaurant is vegetarian. Great poem though, Kai
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Date: 10/3/2016 8:57:00 PM
Tango, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/3/2016 10:42:00 AM
Hi Tanvi, Congratulations on your 2nd place:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/3/2016 3:09:00 PM
Hi Tanvi, If you go to the "Contest Winners/ Status" page you will find a list of winners. Click on the contest entitled "Imaginary Restaurant " and you will find yourself among the winners. Furthermore, Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope you enjoy your stay here: -) Alexis
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Tanvi Agarwal
Date: 10/3/2016 12:41:00 PM
Hello.Thank you and can u please tell me about my 2nd placement
Date: 10/3/2016 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Tanvi, lovely write! Sounds nice, pure veg :) wish to pay a visit here! !enjoyed , love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/3/2016 7:36:00 AM
Tanvi, lovely poem...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/15/2016 11:31:00 PM
TANVI, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Tanvi Agarwal
Date: 9/16/2016 9:46:00 AM
Hey! Skat I m a teen who is in love with poem writing. I m eager to be your friend and I have started following you on poetry soup. Hope you like my poems . Hugs ××Tanvi××
Date: 9/13/2016 3:51:00 PM
TanVi A,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/12/2016 12:49:00 PM
Your descriptive write makes it sound so lovely Tanvi but I do like my meat and fish so it wouldn't be for me:-) hugs Jan xx
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