The Lion

A season of cold White snowflakes cover the ground Winter's lion roars Season: Winter

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/23/2010 11:23:00 AM

This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 6/21/2010 5:49:00 PM

Very interesting poem here. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda

Marycile Beer

Date: 6/21/2010 4:07:00 PM

I have met a few of those lions in my day, Danial. I must not fear them to much as I still live with them during the WINTER. Keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Daniel. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 6:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Daniel. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/21/2010 2:42:00 AM

Hi Dan :) Really liked the contrast of your second line to your last line here--congrats on your 7th place win :) --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 5:10:00 PM

Cool image of the lion in winter! congratulations!

Date: 6/19/2010 1:40:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 9:04:00 PM

Congrats Dan on your success in my contest with this wonderful write and entry... also appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Charles Henderson

Date: 6/16/2010 1:40:00 PM

Dan, this poem feels good in our 98 degree weather. Soup mail waiting. Charles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2010 1:18:00 PM

Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..I am not to fond of the that winter lion ..Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/16/2010 5:53:00 AM

Well written Senryu, Dan! Like especially your last line! And thank you for your kind comments! Alles Gute und eine schöne Woche...Gruss, Gert

De R

Date: 6/16/2010 12:43:00 AM

"Winter's lion roars" ...interesting perspective..Enjoyed your inspiring Senryu! Kisses, Emily

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/15/2010 8:21:00 PM

Nice expressions on winter with apt images, Daniel

James Peranteau

Date: 6/15/2010 4:55:00 PM

Great Senryu Daniel ! Winter is a must in my life, and the mountain lion adds a special touch ! TY for this great write ! james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/15/2010 1:57:00 PM

Excellent senryu on the winter season, Daniel. Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/15/2010 1:06:00 PM

ooh, lovely. Love the idea of Winter's lion. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)