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The Line

Patiently they stand in a line As it stretches a block or more For the food doled out to homeless, To the old, the young and the poor. I wonder how each came to be In that line that moves so slow. Each person has his own story Thought it’s one we may never know. One perhaps a hard working man With good job for whole adult life. Who lost his job in recession. He can’t care for children and wife. Medicine costs have been so high For the old man who has been ill. He and his wife have no money To buy food their hunger to still. There may have been a disaster That brought some to this sorry state. Many are only a pay check away From suffering very same fate. I hope when elections are over It matters not which side has won, The congressmen will remember There is a big job to be done. Hunger in America should Be first on the list not the last. Long lines waiting for donated food Must soon be a shame of the past. For Paula Swanson's "Line" contest 5th place

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Date: 9/25/2010 12:22:00 PM
Congrats on your contemplative poem, Joyce! You've touched on a topic that should really be given more awareness to-- nikko :)
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Date: 9/24/2010 9:16:00 PM
You chose such a relevent topic, Joyce. Congratulations on your very fine win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/24/2010 11:57:00 AM
Joyce, your poem really deserves to be in the winner's circle. It has an important meaningful message, especially your last stanza. Congratulations! I put this one into my fav's. Love, Connie
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula Swanson's contest "Line". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:38:00 AM
At least where there is a line there is hope, somebody has decided to help, a very poinient poem - congrats on you placement in this contest
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Date: 9/24/2010 4:33:00 AM
Bread lines emerged during the Great Depression and their reappearance in recent years is evidence of how much people are struggling to survive in today's economy. Indeed, we should make feeding our fellow Americans a top priority. It riles me when I think of how much money is sent to other countries for "humanitarian aid" when we have people here who need our help so desperately. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:48:00 PM
Timely write..congrats on your win in the contest. BG
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:27:00 PM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/23/2010 8:58:00 PM
A very touching and beautiful poem. many congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:59:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your win in the Line contest.. another great write and win to enjoy with luv my friend..
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Date: 9/23/2010 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 9/20/2010 11:28:00 PM
Joyce, this is truly a tribute to those whose lives have changed so drastically with the economy and joblessness on the rise. A poem that conveys a heartfelt sense of kinship with those in need who hunger. My applause. I am sure your poem will do well in Paula's contest. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:49:00 AM
A wonderful write on the theme of line, Joyce. Good luck
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:03:00 PM
very thoughtful story of a big problem in this country..well done Joyce! Take care~Deb
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