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The Likes of You

Dear Sir I ask of you to remember the likes of me your solemn ways shook my core but it was just us in our world..... A simply courtyard of green encircled with cream colored glass toasted in a warm afternoon sun and chilled in our indigo evenings.... We will lay side by side togetherness to be widely wide spread with capes and pine cone needles we lay like a king and queen.... Together will were with, the likes of us we were all alone then we were so new we loved so tenderly..... We loved so bold and blue our colors our sunsets were ours for the taken so wonderful with the likes of you... Brooke Dylan 2014

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Robert Lindley

Date: 5/8/2014 10:40:00 PM

A true gem! So much passion and reflection . This is quite simply priceless.... " A simply courtyard of green encircled with cream colored glass toasted in a warm afternoon sun and chilled in our indigo evenings"....

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/9/2014 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Robert...you are so nice

Vera Duggan

Date: 5/8/2014 9:18:00 PM

That is so beautiful Brooke, absolutely loved the theme, you certainly do write beautiful words, a very gifted writer..............Vera................

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/8/2014 9:35:00 PM

Thank you so much vera..

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/8/2014 2:23:00 PM

Hi Brooke, WOW! This was elegant and dreamy and as always, beautiful to read. Love your writes Brooke:~) Thank you for your kindness as well. Thanks also for sharing this very nice write with us here. Peace, Deborah

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/8/2014 3:47:00 PM

Thank you Deborah You are awesome poet I am honored..

David Williams

Date: 5/8/2014 2:13:00 PM

Brooke I like the content very much and your choice of words are well thought out, but if I could say that as a free verse it would look better if it were not set out in quatrains, it is good, but let it just flow out....hope you don't mind me saying this....David

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/8/2014 3:46:00 PM

Thank you David.. I need all the help I can get.. I appreciate it..

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/8/2014 12:41:00 PM

I like it! !..very well written lines... moving and filled w/ passion.. :O)) XOXO

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/8/2014 3:45:00 PM

thank you dear AiyaH...