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The Lighthouse

Waves around impinging ferociously the seashore fiercely anticipating To settle personal retribution in darkened murderous circumstances. Night's sincere sentinel exhibiting the water’s shallowness environments to water vehicles incessantly to avert dangerous situations. +++ September 22, 2014 Form: Rhopalic Verse Dr.Ram Mehta Third Place Win Contest:The Lighthouse by nette onclaud

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Date: 9/29/2014 3:17:00 PM
Wow......you really did a great piece with this difficult form ! Well done, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:55:00 AM
Nicely done Dr. Ram.
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:25:00 AM
solid write dr.ram... my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats!
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:37:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Mehta. You did a marvelous job on your winning poem.
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Date: 9/28/2014 1:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Mehta on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:29:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/24/2014 12:17:00 AM
gosh< I still have not even studied this form out and I might not make the deadline, but good for you. you did it!!
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:28:00 AM
What an excellent write using a very difficult form. I hope this places high in the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2014 5:02:00 AM
your poetry light shines brightly......
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:18:00 AM
excellent write Dr Mehta good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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