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The Light

Still remember The stabbed of your Sucking heart, left a scar Within; a scar that never Heal, but grown deeper To an abyss. I tried hard to fill, But it was futile. Stupefaction and solitude Have some-time made The sun to sink within cloud. Now, season change to dry; The sun shines aglow and Her mantle as twilight never go astray, But the spike still prompt; Makes me hurt the innocent heart. Hope the light comes soon And my memories fade soon A.M. 8/26/15

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Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2015 3:14:00 PM

Afolab,this dark piece grabbed my attention instantly. You expressed the feelings of pain and loneliness really well. The light will come my fiend.Good job!:-) Alexis 7

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2015 1:26:00 PM

how lauis is this, afolabi, and i like the metaphors you used to capture the loneliness expressed through yourwonderful work!.. hugggs

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/29/2015 6:44:00 PM

A very intriguing write. An introspective lense that captures the reader. Likes!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2015 2:11:00 PM

just amazing in its essence, afolabi.. well done!

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/30/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thank you Emile for dropped by to read and comment to my page..........A.M.

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/28/2015 10:19:00 AM

A somewhat surreal over the edge mixture of emotions that speak of discontentment within the author's sphere of influence. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/27/2015 4:45:00 AM

introspective write Afolabi.. :) blessings to you always!~Olive Eloisa =')

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/30/2015 3:01:00 PM

Thank you very much for your pleasant comment.........A.M.

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/26/2015 1:01:00 PM

A deeply emotive write, AM. A new day always comes after the darkness in the night, with it the sun and the real light. Lookout, you do not wish to regret having let go the one who got away. Most of the time they are those whom you see everyday, at work, where you live, but don't notice. God bless! hugs! (PS. You might want to remove the extra "e" from "hard" at line 5. :-)

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/30/2015 3:10:00 PM

abundant grace KIM, am a lot grateful to you for your pleasant comment and your hand. Thanks........A.M.