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The Lewd Dude

There was a man who searched for the oasis But was lacking in the social graces He’d splash on some musk But then acted brusque By looking for love in all the thong places

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Arlo Parker

Date: 9/15/2023 9:57:00 PM

oops, a spelling error....oh, I see what you did there!! cheers, :o)

Bill Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 4:18:00 PM

Making me smile so it must be another funny Limerick, David. Thanks for the smile my friend. Cheers! Bill

The Situation

Date: 9/6/2023 2:52:00 PM

I'm wearing musk.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/31/2023 8:09:00 PM

Well written and outstanding quip in that last line, Panagiota xx

John Lawless

Date: 8/31/2023 2:14:00 PM

Nicely done David, a true limerick, thanks for the chuckle

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/31/2023 1:56:00 PM

enjoyed, reading this final line and all, smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2023 1:16:00 PM

Yep! I think he did lack in social graces. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing the humor and for dropping by my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/30/2023 7:20:00 PM

lol. Good one, David!

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/30/2023 7:19:00 PM

LOL… Yes, I agree with Jan on the last line. Fantastic, David. Hope you don’t mind but I’m printing this one out for work tomorrow. :)

David Fisher
Date: 8/31/2023 10:53:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Akkina. And yes, print away, thanks!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2023 6:09:00 PM

ha ha ha that final line is priceless lol xx