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... The Letter A letter fell from heaven and it landed at my door. The letter had a message - Cry for me no more. As I was reading the message, I knew it came from you. Where do the souls of our love ones go when they leave this world? We cry, we suffer and our hearts are broken, because we won't see them anymore. The days pass and the months, soon turn into years. Little by little the pain becomes less. But we still ask ourselves - where do the souls go? The souls go to their destiny. God has a special place for them. We want to think that everything ends here- that one day we just go to sleep and we wake up in a beautiful place called heaven. I know now that you are in heaven and that you also watch over me. One day when God calls me - we will reunite again. You say that you are happy, that you feel no more pain. You tell me not to worry, to go on with my life. This is just what I will do and whenever I feel sad - I will open up the letter and read the message again. It is time to say - good bye dear - I have a smile on my face, because now I know that you are in a very special place... Written 03/31/2012 by Lucilla M. Carrillo For Lisa Haitt Dark Poetess Contest ( Letting Go )

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Date: 4/11/2014 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful sad write Lucilla. this earth is just a testing place for all the souls of the human race. Yes the agony fades but the beautiful memories live on, take care Lucilla hope your health improves. God Bless you.. Andy
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/11/2014 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Andy; I wrote this After I lost my husband. It will be 5 years on this coming thanksgiving. Thank you for reading. about my health - I'm still waiting. I thank my Lord Jesus for all the friends and all the prayers. Many blessings... Lucilla
Date: 10/24/2012 10:53:00 PM
I like this one Lucilla: Speaking of love, letters and souls, I invite you to read The White Rose Part 1,2, and 3. This is my take on where they come together. YarnSpinner Robert G. Jerore
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Date: 10/12/2012 2:38:00 PM
Reading some of your "old" poem tonight. Pleased I found this. - A loss that will always be in your heart Lucilla. - Touching but beautifully written. - - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/5/2012 2:14:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved first place win! Yours are beautiful and comforting words. Blessings, Rhonda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 4/5/2012 2:14:00 PM
And congrats on your first win'
Date: 4/5/2012 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place finish in this contest. This deserved to be at the top of the list.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2012 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Robert, I didn't know that I won. Thanks for reading my poem too. Lucilla
Date: 4/5/2012 10:14:00 AM
congrats Lucilla on a wonderful win for first place for letting go luv..
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2012 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Linda marie. This was my first time that I entered a poem. Lucilla
Date: 4/5/2012 8:25:00 AM
Beautiful....this could be lyrics to a wonderful song! Well done, a big congratulations!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2012 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, you all are so nice. Lucilla
Date: 4/5/2012 7:56:00 AM
wow!!!!!!congrats on the top placement in the "letting go" contest......~sashi
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2012 11:43:00 AM
thank you too for having read my poem. Lucilla
Date: 4/5/2012 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lisa's "Letting Go" contest Lucilla. Love, Carol
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2012 11:46:00 AM
Hi Carol; I finally see your picture. You are very pretty. Thank you for all the comments that you have on my poems. Many blessings. Lucilla
Date: 4/2/2012 9:29:00 PM
This is one special letter- very lovely Lucilla and all the very best, brenda : )
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/3/2012 7:08:00 AM
Thank you very much. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Lucilla
Date: 4/1/2012 10:46:00 AM
amazing Lucilla.. the part where we leave Earth and wake up in Heaven.. is truly gifted line .. good luck in contest luv.. this is a winner .. a wow wonder of a write luv..
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/1/2012 10:57:00 AM
Thankyou so much. This really means so much for me. God Bless. Lucilla
Date: 3/31/2012 10:43:00 PM
Yes your poem is very much like mine in theme. It is hard to let them go, but they need to find blessed peace. Thank you for your comments. Lucilla. Good luck. Love, Joyce
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/1/2012 11:00:00 AM
Hi Joyce; I am just learning how to reply to the comments. Thank you very much for reading my poetry. You yourself write very beautiful. God bless you. Lucilla
Date: 3/31/2012 10:07:00 PM
Beautiful Lucilla :) good luck in the contest
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/5/2012 11:49:00 AM
Hi jessica; I just found out that I won. Lucilla

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