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The Lesson She’d sought the love that was fool’s gold, a brassy thing, shiny and bold. Thinking her home was in his arms, she found that his hugs, did not warm. She parted swiftly with a grin. and said, "I won't be fooled again." 11/17/16 Iambic tetrameter 4 beats per 8 syllable line Contest 244 Brian Strand

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Date: 11/18/2016 12:52:00 PM
all that glitters is not gold... this amazing poem is grounded and well done, janis; wow!..huggs
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/18/2016 4:51:00 PM
This is so true. Thanks, nette. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 11/18/2016 10:40:00 AM
Very well written, Janis. A great example of fool's gold:)
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Date: 11/18/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel.
Date: 11/17/2016 8:17:00 PM
Good one Janis! Good luck in the contest. :)
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Janis Thompson
Date: 11/17/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.

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