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The Legend

Just about every morning, I see him there, A solitary figure on the basketball court. He is shooting free throw after free throw, And most of them go in, but some do not. But it doesn’t matter now like it once did, Not anymore, not so far away from fame, And a half century away from big crowds. I bet it would have meant everything once, Back in a time when the lights were bright, And a crossover dribble was second nature. For the shooter, it’s the allure of the game, This city game that spread out like wildfire, A game played in small, overstuffed gyms, And any patch of country dirt with a hoop. For some, the game’s siren call never dies. The days, months, and years turn to decades, And the shooter keeps shooting free throws, No doubt seeking the sweet swishing sound, Of the ball going in with spinning perfection. There is no other alternative for the shooter, It is just him, the basketball, and the basket, And the slow rhythmic cadence of each shot, Chasing the game until the final buzzer sounds, Shot after shot, in the still, tropical, morning air.

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Date: 4/10/2024 4:39:00 AM
I liked how your poem celebrates the enduring love for basketball and the timeless dedication of those who continue to pursue their passion for the game, finding joy and solace in the simple act of shooting hoops, regardless of fame or recognition. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 3/21/2024 6:04:00 PM
Sports can get boring when there's nothing new going on. This is an excellent sport poem.
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:00:00 AM
Hello Thomas, your poem beautifully captures the timeless dedication of a basketball player to their craft. I loved how you convey the solitary pursuit of perfection through amazing imagery, echoing the relentless passion that drives the shooter. I liked that true love for the game transcends time and circumstance, persisting in the rhythmic cadence of each shot. Thomas, this is a very evocative reflection on the enduring allure of basketball. - Blessings, Daniel
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Thomas Bruce
Date: 3/20/2024 9:49:00 AM
You are very kind for saying that. I think you summed it better than I could have. You are spot on in your assessment of where I was trying to get to. Many thanks to you for taking the time. Tom Bruce

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