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The Lavatory

Conman walks to the lavatory ,stares at the way he treated me.

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/28/2017 8:48:00 AM

It seems that the Conman has come upon a realization in the mirror. He sees himself and how he looks after he has conned you and perhaps realizes for the first time how it changes him in a way he does not like to see.

Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/4/2018 3:38:00 PM

Your perception is so wickedly spot on every time. Thank you

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/14/2017 2:57:00 PM

I feel stupid. Okay, is he admiring himself as he imitates his treatment of 'you' in the mirror for his ego's pleasure? That's all I got and it seems right, seems right deep, too - you did deep again - and twice in a row. Are you peaking? If I got it right, it is extremely clever and you are too smart to be my friend! Wow, again, Jannie ... CayCay

Jannie Breedt
Date: 3/24/2017 12:32:00 AM

Hi Cay Cay, you always seem to catch me out. Ha ha.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2017 10:32:00 AM

Quite a different one, Jannie! yep, another one for peeping toms like me. heehee!! (in response to what you said at my poem!)