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The Laughing Lady Frights

I hadn’t noticed before now that her smile was painted on accented with deep crimson lipstick her eyes too seemed to gaily laugh outlined in black to pop out from her pale languid hanging flesh a perfect piñata ready to be smashed what goodies lie within her bloated face void staring out into the world I can almost hear the carnival barker three tries a quarter come now come one & all come & see the life revealed while in the shadows lurk the clowns within the trailer long & winding down into the pit into the swirl as water rushes gurgling past boat & sailor at half mast she poses in front of us bigger than life scaring heck out of us before doors open

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Date: 6/23/2016 10:30:00 PM
Giovanni Maria Riccio Tommaso, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/19/2016 6:31:00 PM
Giovanni, a very good write, here you will receive the help you need to better your words, find meaning. I do hope your situation gets better. Sorry to read your boat failed. Hugs... Skat
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