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The Last Wish

The Last Wish
Ahh! In this last day, Let me see the sun shining on the hay...... for a last time...... in a last vision..... let me see the Almighty......., of creation..... Let the horrid sins of men, Be Subdued............., Let the sea of hope........., tide us over. For all,and ever let sickness and ailments....... Be banished for ever...... Let me for a last time..............................................., Close my eyes, Forever.......................................................................................................................

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Date: 7/25/2013 8:40:00 PM
I say amen to that brother.
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:53:00 AM
I like this a lot.thanks for sharing!
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/10/2013 10:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot!!
Date: 7/10/2013 8:39:00 AM
Hi Neil, i love the vision you wish to visit on your last day... a beautiful and lovely way of peace.... .................. .................... enjoyed your forever feel.... LINDA
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Date: 7/10/2013 10:19:00 AM
I have entered your contest. hope to chat with you sometime..
Date: 7/10/2013 7:50:00 AM
- Hey Neil - I like your poem very well ..... - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/10/2013 8:08:00 AM
I have finished deleting the extra 15 copies!!!! thanks!! for your comment.

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