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The Last Walk

It was as if the rain knew my heart well, Sheltered in an umbrella, so no one can tell, I tried to act calm, a smile dangled in vain, My umbrella broke, tired in the heavy rain. He smiled and talked in delight, carefree, I listened, but became lost,could only agree, Pity I had for his innocent hope, In silence, I tried to cope. As I saw my fence, I let the rain slip, As the umbrella flew, he tried to hold grip, I let tears flow as I embraced him, He stood confused, but finally gave in. Date - 19/09/2023

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Date: 9/24/2023 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Ranaditya. A poem of feelings, I love it. Many blessings to you
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Ranaditya Adhikary
Date: 9/24/2023 9:20:00 PM
Eve, Thank You! very much for selecting my poem in your contest :-)

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