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The Last Time

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The Last Time


Cherry tree rendered
Sweet warm breezes surrender
Petals falling down
Natures blanket we have found
Last love we will remember

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  1. Date: 11/1/2010 10:30:00 AM
    I love this Tanka. Makes me want to curl up by a fire under a low window, so I can see the leafs falling, a warm cup of apple cider and a significant other at my side. O well, so much for dreaming. Thanks, heaps for your comments. Always, Joy (jew)

  1. Date: 10/31/2010 5:25:00 PM
    Very nice. Reminds me of being at my grandmother,s in the country.

  1. Date: 10/31/2010 9:45:00 AM
    Cherry and Sukara blossoms are like pink and white snow. It's so sad it only lasts a short while Sharon, but we have your Tanka for ever >> James :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 2:23:00 PM
    Very nice with great imagery, Sharon! Love it and enjoyed the picture your describe. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.

  1. Date: 10/29/2010 5:55:00 AM
    Nice bliss under nature's blanket , Sharon

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 5:57:00 PM
    lovely tanka Shar

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 3:52:00 PM
    Sweet Sharon .. if for the contest good luck.. lovely lines of expression tonight ..

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 3:50:00 PM
    Very passionate write that you have graced us with in this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..I am happy that you found my work enjoyable..Thanks for your gracious comments..Sara

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 3:45:00 PM
    So sweet and the kind you read over and over again....always Michael to ,my Fav.it goes! and you to my fav. poet list

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 3:34:00 PM
    enjoyed your work!! Keep your composing...fun and flowing!!