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Have I? Captured you? Rapture’d you? I stare at you The moon at my back Wine dripping as blood Life dripping from your soul My red hair shines and glows My Naughty thoughts so sublime I will devour you I will make you Make you be who you are Make you howl like a wolf in the night Pleasures as you have never known Caressing upon your chest My love, we have no time at all to rest In peace, just yet Do you see me, full of your essence? I smile at our fate of the evening time I know in the end All the pleasure I bring to you You oh great love will return ten fold I will moan like a satisfied feline We have accomplished what our tribes said was not Allowed or possible Hold me dear Hold me forever As we plunge Together in the depths of love And leave this world Forever Notes: This poem was all over the map, and finally I molded it after the famous Romeo and Juliet.

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Date: 3/14/2015 7:17:00 PM
Captivating, passionate and fatal!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 7:59:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/10/2015 10:37:00 AM
really excellent pen arthur love how you drew this from a classic top shelf piece pal
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 10:18:00 AM
Thank you liam, much appreciated!
Date: 3/9/2015 6:40:00 PM
Love the new take on Romeo and Juliet...awe inspiring
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Tim!
Date: 3/9/2015 4:49:00 PM
Kind of vampirish one!! At least if I go by the title. but I can also see it as the Romeo and Juliet story. Passionate!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:22:00 PM
I twisted this one a wee bit! :)
Date: 3/9/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this tremendous poem,and thank you for your lovely comment on my poem,much appreciated
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:22:00 PM
Most welcome Fatima
Date: 3/9/2015 6:41:00 AM
Hotness,loveness and lustiness all combined together. To make magic like your words:-).
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:20:00 PM
As I do yours
Date: 3/9/2015 1:35:00 AM
I love the flavor this poem gives to the senses Arthur. Your poem far outshines the pictures. It is an occult delight, chilling and yet fulfilling. Bravo! 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/9/2015 10:19:00 PM
You Connie are so kind!

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