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The Last Summer Bikini Tan Lines

The last Bikini Tan lines of summer Fades like autumn leaves and fall colors As it's being blown away By the western Isle of Scotland winds Now it’s time for Halloween

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Jack Ellison

Date: 9/20/2012 6:24:00 AM

Autumn, although beautiful, has always been a sad time for me! Will miss those bikini clad ladies! LOL

Annie Lander
Date: 9/23/2012 5:31:00 AM

i know, oh how i long for the summer days.. i am a Island Gal..

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/19/2012 10:34:00 AM

Well Annie, this is different, and it's a beautiful poem, love how you combine the tan of summer with the winds of the western Isle...

Annie Lander
Date: 9/19/2012 10:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Harry, as you know next month is Halloween month no more exposure to the sun, it all about covering up from the harsh winds either the Scotland winds of the Eastern winds one love annie L

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/19/2012 10:05:00 AM

You're right! But I still prefer being enthralled by the tan, and not thralled by the Bogeyman... Great Poem... Terry

Annie Lander
Date: 9/19/2012 10:48:00 AM

Thank you Terry O'Leary my Irish eyes