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The Last Line

a bloom in deathbed--twilight's bidding goodbye 12/27/18

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Date: 12/30/2018 1:16:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower
Date: 1/3/2019 3:34:00 AM

Thank you, congrats too. All the best, Anne-Lise. hugs!

Date: 12/29/2018 11:55:00 AM

Nicely done, Moon Flower. You've showed so much sadness in just one line. Good luck in the contest. May your new year be very blessed. Hugs Eve~`*

Moon Flower
Date: 12/30/2018 8:58:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. Have a blessed New Year as well. Love & Light. Hugs. :)

Date: 12/29/2018 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations for your win :)

Moon Flower
Date: 12/30/2018 8:56:00 AM

Thank you, again. :)

Date: 12/29/2018 8:47:00 AM

Beautiful and evocative, lovely done. Congrats on your win :) xomo!

Moon Flower
Date: 12/29/2018 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen.

Date: 12/29/2018 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations for your win :)

Moon Flower
Date: 12/29/2018 10:40:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi. :)

Date: 12/29/2018 7:55:00 AM

Hi Moon Flower, Great one-liner. Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis

Moon Flower
Date: 12/29/2018 10:39:00 AM

Hi Alexis. Thank you. :)

Date: 12/29/2018 6:29:00 AM

Beautiful words, lovely imagery Moon.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Moon Flower
Date: 12/29/2018 10:38:00 AM

Thank you, Silent O. :) Too bad I missed the other Monoku poetry contest. All the best!