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The Last Goodbye

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November 29, 2018
Poem of the day on December 1, 2018
Placed first in The Last poetry contest by Silent One
Placed first in Mid February 2019 contest by Brian Strand

Inviting vibrancy as the season changed Smiley faces bloomed, reopening dreams. Seeing you there marked a blessed event Akin to magical when first time eyes met. Breezing trees heard the whispers of leaves Flirting with patterns of shadowy sketches, There you unfolded what love could mean Planting bold dreams in affectionate kisses Floating on air in the lilting summer winds. Blazing colors inspired falling ocher scenery Dazzling in hues of resplendent paintings As we wrote music in autumn's reverie: A seductive beginning of romantic ending Composed in themes of passionate lyrics. Mountain tops donned snow-white crowns Satiating fantasies in pristine landscapes, Culminating desires into sensual escapes As the last goodbye lent your heart to me Ending your visit and our idyllic love story. Your beat I hear still, but it lost its melody.

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Timothy Ray

Date: 4/8/2022 7:04:00 PM

a lovely walk in love has gone away...great last line

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2021 2:23:00 PM

couldn't find a new poem to respond to, so checked out your number one best poem on Soup . I notice I have seen this one already too. But it is STILL a REALLY BEST poem

Arjun Jangid

Date: 6/22/2021 5:44:00 AM

I hear your beat still, amazing.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/10/2021 6:50:00 PM

Vijay, A magical place described in your last goodbye. Though colors run from those lost seasons as a lover's tune fades. Truly a 'idyllic love story' from pre-Pan(demic) times, sadly missed. -Richard

James Inman

Date: 4/22/2020 1:08:00 PM

Very romantic with wonderful imagery.

Pontsho Tshabalala

Date: 3/8/2020 5:21:00 AM

This was beautiful. Well done Vijay

John Hamilton

Date: 1/29/2020 5:20:00 PM

Nice to see this one on the top 100 of all time, this is great not sure if it's your best, but hey, nice to see you on the all time great list!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/25/2019 6:16:00 PM

Vijay, 'As the last goodbye lent your heart to me Ending your visit and our idyllic love story.' Simply wonderful love story told in your exacting style I've come to admire so much. Your poem's message and melody are not lost on me. -Richard

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/22/2019 6:18:00 PM

Hello Viiaj Pandit,your poem at the end is sad. It is not easy to break up. Have a nice evening my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2019 3:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win Vijay..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/14/2019 11:52:00 AM

You are a winner Vijay. Your words belong soaring beyond the sky. Congratulations on this win. ~ Brandy

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 2/11/2019 12:17:00 AM

There is no point in congratulating so late, but that does not take away anything from the poem so well written, Vijay Pandit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2019 4:41:00 PM

double congrats, I see this is your number one poem now and also it got a POTD. Way to go, Vijay.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/30/2018 9:51:00 AM

Congratulations for #7 on the Best New Poems List Vijay :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 12/26/2018 9:41:00 AM

A surprise at the end of a well written love store captures the reality of a heart shocked by betrayal.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 12/16/2018 1:04:00 PM

Dear Vijah, it is absolutely a masterpiece and certainly a favorite for me, um, I guess that I am late but still it is not late enough to congratulate you and I see that it has also won a contest, so many congratulations on your wonderful win and on your poem being chosen as POTD, good luck my friend and have a really nice day

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Faraz..appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/16/2018 11:04:00 AM

Sorry my great friend, I have only now discovered this exquisitely creative, wondrously beautiful and magnificent gem you have created! Such depths of love in these verses and one can see this as being from a real life experience, one that sings true to the romantic melody in a true poet's heart. A fav.. a glistening jewel my friend..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/19/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Robert. Appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Robertina B.

Date: 12/11/2018 2:55:00 PM

A much belated congratulations on your win Vijay.. A beautiful and breathtaking verse you indeed penned.. Imagery is incredible!! I so much enjoyed your exquisite verse, my friend.. Blessings!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Robertina..your visit and kind words are much appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/9/2018 2:12:00 PM

Hi Vijay, An amazing poem, a write proudly awaiting deserved comments. The passion you portray is so real, I can all most feel it as I read each line - well done. Best wishes, Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer..appreciate the kind feedback.

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/8/2018 8:59:00 AM

Really intriguing last line...no more melody...A wonderful write all over...All the best Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/14/2018 7:46:00 AM

Thank you Arturo.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/5/2018 10:01:00 AM

WoW! Great melancholy love poem, VJ. Kudos on POTD. This beautiful poem moves the heart on exquisite wings of poetic elegance. Stellar bright write. Love and more love always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/8/2018 9:00:00 AM

Thank you Freddie..always happy to read your comments..many many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/3/2018 10:32:00 AM

Hi Vijay...I see that since I last visited, this excellent poem has garnered a top placement and p.o.t.d. award ..... Congratulations on all counts!! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 1:01:00 PM

Thanks for the return visit Paul...appreciate the cheerful feedback.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 12/3/2018 9:53:00 AM

Vijay, this is gorgeous. So literate and emotive. Very good indeed.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Dale..appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/2/2018 6:38:00 PM

Such beautiful verse; especially, "Mountain tops donned snow-white crowns Satiating fantasies in pristine landscapes, Culminating desires into sensual escapes As the last goodbye lent your heart to me Ending your visit and our idyllic love story. "; I do love that.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 12:59:00 PM

Thank you M.L.K...appreciate the visit and kind feedback.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2018 5:48:00 PM

Awesome poem and placement. Congrats to you.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2018 12:58:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.