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The Last Farewell

The End, a dazzling beam of tranquil infinity Where darkness is loveliest, I could gladly soar Far into the glimmering galaxies in dream's serenity, A blazing bubble buoyed, yearning to roar. A voiceless stream where the stars everlasting Take contemplation in joy's exalted strands, Where Nothing transcends the space overflowing, Impenetrable in the canvas of aspiring Sunlands. True, I so loved the glory of living thunder Of clamorous winds and bellowing seas, Of skylines' azure hills of grandeur, Of passions that stretched and stretched beyond seams. I take one last farewell, a child of earth Prized to rest among heaven's gilded clouds. A modest cottage, beautiful in its silent breath With an infant's smile, a soul without bounds. I now close my eyes keeping that defiant glare With wolf's courage, an imperiousness that never dies. My God! Can I look upon one last time, eternity's flair And share the splendor of that dust in the skies?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 1:56:00 PM
nice to see this one, again.
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:55:00 AM
you really give an perfect meaning to your name..its really great to read this poem....
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 1/14/2016 4:50:00 AM
Thanks a lot
Date: 12/4/2015 12:49:00 AM
Wow! What an excellent piece. I like how it was constructed. Thanks for sharing............A.M.
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/4/2015 12:59:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi
Date: 12/3/2015 12:02:00 AM
Congratulations! Great images.
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/3/2015 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 12/2/2015 11:51:00 PM
Ravindran, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/3/2015 10:19:00 AM
Hi, thank you so much
Date: 12/2/2015 10:31:00 PM
Wonderful write Ravindran! Congrats on top podium!!
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/3/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/2/2015 5:02:00 PM
Ravindran, Welcome to Poetry Soup! Congratulations on your winning write it was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/3/2015 10:20:00 AM
Hi, thank you so much
Date: 12/2/2015 12:34:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations Ravindran.
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/3/2015 10:21:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/2/2015 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest! I am reading below that this is your first post. I must say, you wrote superbly and carried a flow with such imagery. You will LOVE Poetry Soup! Keep up the good work Ravindran!! -lu *smiles*
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 12/2/2015 11:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot. Never for a moment it crossed me I'm winning. Right on top of the world. And btw How do we see the other poems? A BIG THANK YOU.
Date: 11/29/2015 10:45:00 PM
Hi Ravindran, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 11/29/2015 11:09:00 PM
Hi Pandita, thanks a lot.
Date: 11/29/2015 10:05:00 PM
Ravindran, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 11/29/2015 11:10:00 PM
Thank you Linda. How do I get a feedback? The pluses and minuses in our poems?
Date: 11/28/2015 1:58:00 PM
Ravindran, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Ravindran Manghat
Date: 11/28/2015 11:51:00 PM
Hi, it's such a nice feeling. I'm having the first taste of a poetry soup, literally. It's such a wonderful world, lol.

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