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The Last Drop of Tear

.......The last drop of tear……… Embracing the eyes, caressing them The last drop of tears is most beautiful It doesn’t shed and leave eyes like its brethren It remains with eyes till the end; dutiful And it only leaves when eyes stop crying It ensures the woes are gone; pain thus ended Indeed the tear stakes its own life, its existence But never quits its efforts: meaningful and splendid And when it loses its life; let its corpse disperse in air Even then its soul is there, to be together, to care And its warmth reminds eyes not to cry anymore But to respect tear’s endeavors: so selfless, so pure And then eyes smile; pain ends; moments rejoice The unsung saga of last drop of tear, it dies but ends the cries…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/23/2015 12:10:00 AM
Hi Abhishek, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/8/2015 12:04:00 AM
Abhishek, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/6/2015 12:48:00 AM
This is a very deep poem, Abhishek, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2015 3:57:00 PM
tear is shed mostly when sad....but immense happiness also make a person cry...good poem ......tear drop finds a very special place in your poem highlighting its selfless nature...... Deep philosophy in it good... Love, Anulaxmi
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