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the last breathe that i take

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the last breathe that i take

                                                                       (6/15/13)
With every decision that I make 
With every last breathe that I take
I’ll be loving you.
There is no distance or obstacle that I wouldn’t climb
To make you mine.
Wouldn’t you like me to hold you in my arms?
And whisper all my love to you
And know that every word is true.
I would love you till the last breathe that I take
Even when I’m sleeping, and more when I’m awake.
Because of you I learned what love is about
Of that I have no doubt.
With just a hello and a simple smile
You have made my life worthwhile.
You opened my eyes to possibilities
Of things that I could not see.
You are my first breathe in the morning
And my last breathe at night, and gave me
The will to continue this fight.
How can I love you more than I do?
When you have made all my dreams come true.

© L. RAMS

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  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:22:00 AM
    - Louis, this is beautiful !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 6/15/2013 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ANNE LISE