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The Lake of Tears

A Lake of tears I am Many lily blossoms everyday here and I await the presence Of someone always Just to watch it al least Though it is a vain hope still I continue .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/16/2012 1:25:00 AM
I dont think this is a vain hope..I feel it is quite admirable..I will out this on my favorites..Juniper
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 10/16/2012 3:18:00 AM
thank you dear jk your doll
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Date: 10/16/2012 1:25:00 AM
*put
Date: 6/17/2012 10:53:00 AM
Sorrowful moments....but nerver give up. - Lovely written jk. - like it a lot. - Have a nice Sunday. - Thank you for visit and comments mine poems.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/17/2012 11:14:00 AM
thanks .jk
Date: 6/17/2012 8:23:00 AM
Touching write.Very nice!
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Jayachandran Chakrapany
Date: 6/17/2012 8:54:00 AM
thanks dear poet .jk
Date: 6/17/2012 7:34:00 AM
Love this piece here...so heartfelt!!! very strong lines here to me.
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Date: 6/17/2012 8:54:00 AM
thanks .jk

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