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~The Lady In White~ (Free Verse) It's late evening, The sun dying, is going down; It's getting so dark all over the land, And high up there too, in that old castle Upon the cliffs facing the sea; Silence had fallen within Filling with mystery, All the endless halls And emptied rooms; A pin dropped could had been heard Falling across over the majestic, Oversized rooms.... But then of sudden a piano's sad notes, Sometimes can be heard, sneaking All the way in.. While the wind outside with the high Waves rises and lashes At the rugged rocks below, Starting a painful howling Like that of an Immortal and wounded beast; Then the forbidden castle itself, From its very foundation Seems to shake, Within the castle's walls Now a very beautiful girl is always there, Wearing a long, and Ivory-snow white colored, very old fashioned dress; Pensive, stares at nothing and Everything, Sorrows untold, shows on her face, Fearful are, her eyes so sad, In the semi-lit big and beautiful room, Holding again her glowing candle Like a torch or flaming sword, She starts to walk all through the Emptied and endless rooms and Ancient halls, There, in that forgotten and forbidden Place, That once she had loved so much; But now, she's doomed to live there Forever, and ever; She's imprisoned, she's a trapped soul, In that very huge and cold mass of Only stones; There in that old castle she's just a Ghost. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2006
October.14.2015

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