The Lady In a Veil

Volcanic ash rock Nooks, crannies, sunrays, warmth As the mist rises Inspired by Raul's picture.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2010 9:16:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Sara.. an awesome write .. I see winner written all over this one.. my entry is Essence.. these photo contest from Raul are wonderful...yes? luv.. Linda-Marie.. luv your title .. awesome!

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/22/2010 6:46:00 AM

Powerful haiku! But do you mean "crannie"? Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/22/2010 5:25:00 AM

Flowing words indeed, thanks so much for you support it means a lot Daniel

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/22/2010 5:06:00 AM

Volcanoes are really something. Another world--a blast from the past. They have to be experienced. The aftermath is surreal, just like your words. Great job.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2010 9:35:00 PM

Go ahead and enter it, Sara. You did GREAT!! luv ya, Andrea

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/21/2010 9:21:00 PM

A very nice depiction of a sheltered and secluded place. Nice you shared this to us, Sara. Always appreciate your kind comment to my poem. (^_^) Noel.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/21/2010 8:29:00 PM

wonderfully descriptive

David Byrne

Date: 2/21/2010 7:40:00 PM

I can see the picture!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/21/2010 4:19:00 PM

Great shot..nice and creative..Charma:)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/21/2010 1:50:00 PM

Thank you Sara for commenting "At the River"! even today when it snowed I could hear the sounds of the train's engine. Here tracks are still used even daily by the steam train connecting some villages from the town of Zittau. On google4 earth you could see the town of Zittau and its surrouondings. Like your Haiku! Isn't it amazing what one could express with only few words? Keep your pen flowing .Gert