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The Lady Down the Lane

The marigolds are all gone; Her lawn is overgrown, dandelions roar amongst the blades, as crickets escape, leaf to leaf. The new neighbors never mow and marigolds were too quaint. When the early light slips in my morning tea, the merry, gold color sets me free like the books we used to read. I have a few still on my shelves from the lady down the lane. Every so often I take one down and begin to read again. This winter when I took one down as the cold had crept too near between the pages near the end pressed marigolds. Next year. March 14, 2020 The Lady Down the Lane contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 3/31/2020 8:10:00 AM
Every so often, I take one down and begin to read again. Of how many books I have read. Donated by my own Lady down The Lane from when I was a kid. Beautifully written and evokes fond memories. Congratulations on your placement. JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/29/2020 11:54:00 PM
Wonderfully written Jack! A bit of haunting nostalgia lingers in your ending. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Date: 3/29/2020 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, Jack - I really enjoyed the details here, especially the morning tea and pressed marigolds in the book-
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Date: 3/15/2020 3:56:00 PM
A beautiful read!
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Jack Webster
Date: 3/15/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 3/14/2020 8:16:00 PM
A well penned slice of life.
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Jack Webster
Date: 3/14/2020 8:44:00 PM
thank you, Caren!

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