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The Lady By the Ocean

The sands on the beach Are like the colour of her hair As i sit by the ocean All i can do is stare The blue of the ocean water Can never match her eyes Despite our natures wishes All she can do is try The blue skies above her Carpet her ceiling surround Her posture of delight In plentiful abound Her body is slight and tanned A joyous site to see This blond beach lady in the sun Gracing the land of the free http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/carolyn.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/28/2009 3:17:00 PM
I walk along the beach every day, I love it, nice poem, I saw your website, it's given me great inspiration, thank you ! I was born on the 1st of Jan, both capricorn love Simone
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, I love the beach... Lovely write, I enjoyed it very much.
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Date: 10/28/2009 6:14:00 AM
Such a lovely poem, James! I'm glad I stopped by for a few minutes and found this. Barbara and I will go to the beach today and try to put the tragedy of our friend's death behind us for a while. Your beautiful imagery brings the sun out! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2009 8:49:00 PM
Lovely portrait in verse .. beautifully written, James... Cupid's arrow must have hit u very hard .... your descriptive quality is simple, yet intense... made me smile for I am a beach baby too... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/25/2009 5:52:00 PM
enjoyed your beach scene,
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Date: 10/25/2009 4:36:00 PM
that does it, Im going to the beach!..enjoyed it my dear..BG
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Date: 10/25/2009 1:08:00 PM
Very nice quatrain. I think you have been struck by cupid's arrow. :) I think you have to go to the ocean, don't you? Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, from your poet friend, Caroline.
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Date: 10/25/2009 11:00:00 AM
Nicely done tribute. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/25/2009 9:59:00 AM
SO ROMANTICALLY BEAUTIFUL..Charma
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