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The Lad and His Candy

Here comes a good  lad 
with his gentle and pure heart
who loves to eat a cotton candy
with no color but only pure white.

When he attempted  to take a bite  
His candy suddenly  flew up into the sky
Amazingly, it transformed  into cumulus clouds
The lad suddenly became an angel
So he flew and followed it up so high.

The angel and clouds are so white
They’re both trying  to make the world so bright
So with our hearts and minds
Purity and cleanliness must reign in our lives.


Oct. 15,2012.   9:30 PM 

Note: 
          ((This is not for the contest)). I wrote this short poem  at the hotel  during the  camp for the 3 kids/boys who stayed with me in my room and fidgeted a lot . It had somehow calmed them down especially the most restless one, Term. I will change the title later because it's a short story.
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Date: 10/31/2012 5:53:00 AM
I am so sorry it has taken me this long to get back to you on the comments you have left on my poetry. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment Leonora. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2012 9:36:00 AM
wonderful write Leonora
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Date: 10/23/2012 10:44:00 AM
this is lovely Leonora,
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:17:00 PM
It's a very short story then! and how sweet that you did this story for the three boys. HOw old are they? You could extend this and make it more detailed to be like a real narrative! Surprised i failed to see this one before. LUv, andrea
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Date: 10/20/2012 8:29:00 PM
I enjoy reading the story poems. You write very well.
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Date: 10/19/2012 5:04:00 PM
Hi sisie-pooh Leo;-), a very calm feeling in your poem.. i love the way it will all surfaces with purity...xox.. good luck in the contest.. always~your soup sister PD
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Date: 10/19/2012 12:02:00 PM
very nice poem my dear friend Norie...what will be the title? hmmmmm :) God bless you always!!! mwuah!!!
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