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The Labyrinth of Our Lives

It is beautiful there, And somewhere is there, The land, A big pyramid of human As well as a column of foe men, A beam of sunlight, A drop of sight When the snow lands We feel the soft pangs Of people long lost, forgotten and desolated And occasionally of whom we remember standing on the coast In our pretty, terrifying labyrinth We forget the beauties of life And struggle to strife And yes It IS beautiful somewhere..............

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Date: 5/26/2015 12:09:00 PM
that somewhere we are all trying to get to, i love it
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Atya Tasneem
Date: 5/26/2015 11:41:00 PM
YES WE ARE Christina thats why we are just scraping by to get to the place where it it beautiful
Date: 5/24/2015 11:19:00 PM
ATYA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Atya Tasneem
Date: 5/26/2015 11:42:00 PM
thankyou:)
Date: 5/19/2015 10:01:00 AM
ATYA T, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/17/2015 12:05:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Atya :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/17/2015 8:56:00 AM
ATYA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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