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The Knight

From whence comes the steel blue clad knight And whence goest he, over there To see the fair maiden so bright From whence comes the steel blue clad knight From kissing the maiden good night His love for her all are aware From whence comes the steel blue clad knight And whence goest he, over there

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2013 2:44:00 PM

Sara, :-) congratulations!! awesome "Triolet" ... xox~ LINDA

Len Gasun

Date: 8/26/2013 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Sara. A great poem indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/25/2013 3:18:00 PM

Beautiful and lovely piece,Sara...Wonderful presentation..Congrats on your win...

John Posey

Date: 8/25/2013 2:39:00 PM

So much talent in such a short, though epic like entry.... Congratulations on your win.... Jake

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/25/2013 3:01:00 AM

Congrats on yr win. Morgan

Skat A

Date: 8/24/2013 7:50:00 PM

thank you for the soup mail...SKAT

Skat A

Date: 8/24/2013 4:48:00 PM

Sara, congratulations.... SKAT

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 8/24/2013 11:26:00 AM

A wonderful write Sara, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read~Caryl

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/23/2013 6:12:00 PM

Very nice Sara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/23/2013 4:09:00 PM

fine write Sara congrats on win Shadow x smile

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/23/2013 1:46:00 PM

I am not surprised that this won top honors! Congratulations Sara!

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/23/2013 1:25:00 PM

enjoyed the read, congrats on your win!

Joseph May

Date: 8/23/2013 12:54:00 PM

congrats on a great win Sara

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/22/2013 10:52:00 AM

Fun read. Congrats on the win...

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/21/2013 6:45:00 PM

Great work, Sara.....and you picked a more difficult form to tell your story! Nice to share this placement with you!!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 8/21/2013 5:48:00 PM

Very nice image of a handsome armor clad knight and a bright, fair maiden. I also like the way the scene unfolds. Slowly, beautifully. Excellent work!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 8:31:00 AM

A lovely write, Sara... is this for the medevil contest? I think that is what it's called... love your triolet .. a verse out of a beautiful fairy tale... xox..Linda

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/14/2013 4:11:00 PM

Great poem, Sara! I love the imagery here, it flows very nicely with your words. Very well done! You might enjoy my poem, "The Castle". And, thank you so much for the encouraging comments! I wish you good luck with all of your poems, as well!

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/14/2013 7:06:00 AM

Excellent , imagery great, you made the triolet look so easy with this one, well done, great write, blessings sueellen

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/14/2013 5:36:00 AM

well captured Sara flows well and enriches (7) Shadow x smiles

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2013 5:27:00 AM

It seems you have mastered the Triolet with this illustrious write my friend! I haven't seen many, if any, Triolets from you in the past but this one exudes perfection Sara! Is this for the contest? It would be an excellent entry! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!