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The Kite

Thin flares of magenta flap tantalizingly From the top of the backyard plum tree. The kite! Dad made it for me only yesterday! How was I to know it would trick me As soon as I got to fly it by myself? It had seemed so live and laughing! I've climbed up as far as I can go. The branches are getting thin. Up close, I can see the broken bones Sticking out, the skin torn, Stuck through by twigs and branches. The wind keeps teasing at the thin red tissue. I want to rescue it from torment.

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Date: 9/26/2022 9:16:00 AM
Palpable personification Elizabeth - captivating!
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 9/26/2022 5:46:00 PM
I have purpose, Craig. In these remembered pictures I want people to understand the minds of their children. Elizabeth
Date: 8/27/2022 9:34:00 PM
You have turned a simple kite into a living, breathing being, so worthy of your kind-hearted rescue. Brilliant!! Thanks, gw
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/29/2022 3:05:00 AM
You are such a precious commenter, Gersh! As with this one, I sometimes don't know what I have written until you tell me. Thanks so much! Eliz

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