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The Kiss

One last kiss before he leaves, A token vowed as they part. A luring note creating linger as time will test an idle heart. Two lost souls alone in a world, Left with nothing but this taste. A hazy zest that must prevail for a broken seal knows waste. An old adventure renews a smile, A friend whose charms incite. A clever plot that favors a yen but fades wanting without a bite. His loyal spirit finds way home, She bears the fruit of her love. A quaint bequest worth more than gold and honored by grace above. —————————————— Type: Rhyme Submitted: 02/10/2018 Contest: Love Poem-Rhyme Only Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 2/24/2018 5:34:00 PM
Charming poem, Jesse. Congrats on your fine win.
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/5/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2018 2:05:00 PM
Simply lovely, Jess, congrats! Viv x
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/5/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/23/2018 10:26:00 AM
great rhythm and rhyme, beautifully expressed thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/5/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/18/2018 7:36:00 PM
This was a wonderful read, Jesse. Good luck in the Innocent Mind contest. I don't think it got judged yet, right?
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Jesse Day
Date: 2/20/2018 8:17:00 AM
Thank you - still awaiting results ...
Date: 2/12/2018 9:17:00 PM
This is very beautiful. Profound love expressed, to the spirit beyond the flesh. I think this is more what God has in mind. And you said it perfectly.
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Jesse Day
Date: 2/20/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you!

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