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The Kiss

Once upon a summers night, the sweetness of a simple smile caught the evening light As the moonlight washed upon its bounty the stars came out that special lovers night Dancing a score among the autumn leaves the restless breeze lamented its mistress Then, with the trees bowing to honor her, her smile lead him to a resounding “yes” Rivers of sweet seduction flooded them, only the night breeze was again alone Two shadows moved together hearts a drum, their separate smiles now becoming one The next sun rose to find them together Love held their two hearts as one forever -The day I got engaged- 2004-

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Date: 7/26/2016 2:38:00 AM
Beautiful and romantically sweet. I see the memories live on...Thanks for your many visits to my work, James. I've been inactive here for a while. Not sure when I'll return. Perhaps soon...
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Just James
Date: 7/30/2016 4:54:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Eileen!
Date: 7/25/2016 7:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win, so much wonderful romantic imagery, great poem.
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Just James
Date: 7/25/2016 11:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Sesosamh
Date: 7/21/2016 3:37:00 PM
so romantic James congrats on your win:-):-) hugs Jan xx
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Just James
Date: 7/22/2016 2:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan!
Date: 7/21/2016 1:50:00 PM
Makes my heart beat,such lovely romantic poem James!Congrats on your win!
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Just James
Date: 7/22/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara..its old, but I updated it a bit...to look fresh!
Date: 7/21/2016 1:34:00 PM
James, Congrats on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my second Premiere contest. Stop by my latest blog "The Perfect One." Forever **SKAT**
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Just James
Date: 7/21/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thank you so much **SKAT**..thanks for hosting us.
Date: 7/21/2016 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Just James
Date: 7/21/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thank you very much BL!
Date: 7/21/2016 10:57:00 AM
So romantic...Congrats on your win! :)
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Just James
Date: 7/21/2016 1:09:00 PM
Thank you very much Sunita!
Date: 7/21/2016 10:12:00 AM
Such beautiful write James! I salute you! Congratulations and keep on writing more. You are indeed an inspiration! ;)
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Just James
Date: 7/21/2016 1:08:00 PM
Thank you so very much Hanstevan, very high praise indeed!
Date: 7/18/2016 6:01:00 AM
Obviously nice ...
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Just James
Date: 7/18/2016 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Probir!

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