The Key

keys plunk stroking ivory melody awakes our bodies sway rhythmically Contest Twenty/ Twenty Poet: Debbie Guzzi *Twenty syllables above

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2012 8:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Debbie! Would love to know how you put the pics in. I enjoy the visual. Blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2012 2:18:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work...See that the site has a new feature and you are taking advantage of it ...Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/3/2012 10:56:00 AM

Love it with the photos, Debbie :D Love what you say here even more :) Super congrats on your win :D hugs!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/3/2012 8:09:00 AM

Congrats, Deb. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going. luv and hugs, Ralph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2012 11:37:00 PM

yours was GRRRREAT!! Congratulations, Debs.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 7:59:00 PM

DEBBIE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/2/2012 5:46:00 PM

Nice and wonderful piece,Debbie.I love the way you arranged your words and the picture you added added more glamor to your poem....Kudos to you my dear friend...And thanks for your help.you are just ...UNIQUE..

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/2/2012 4:23:00 PM

Debbie, wonderful work. I like the photo, thats a nice touch. Congrats on making David's winners' list.....................S.Ronthorpe

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2012 9:59:00 AM

music to my ears, debbie.. super congrats! :) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2012 9:33:00 AM

va va va voom Debbie .. congrats on a sultry piece of exquisite beauty luv.. those keys will heighten the mood every time..oh..

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2012 7:07:00 AM

Congrats Debi on your win.Loved it!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/2/2012 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie nice picture as well xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 3:32:00 PM

Ok, now you are showing off your skill that you showed us in the blog. How COOL is this,you are representing the inspiration of your poem right above your lovely write. Surely a winner!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2012 1:55:00 PM

Beautiful Debbie, like always. - good luck in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Shirley Long

Date: 2/27/2012 1:21:00 PM

Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2012 12:34:00 PM

Beautiful write Debi.Love the picture.I have sent you a soupmail.