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The Keening

The Keening Disconsolate depressions on the valley floor of green With bodies bent and keening, young girls and their kind Take to the dead fields down, to fall upon their knees Scattered, sickly tombstones, laid flat on mud and grass Hearts broken on the sorrow, nothing more War leaves desolation in a lingering stench of death Surroundings void of life but drenched in blood Despair is in the futures of the mourning maidens After the fight a second conflict brews, the eerie wailing Malignant, so many hard tears flood in trembling streams Down, already in the valley, to join the others In rattling fear the young girls touch each cheek Of their men, their loved ones, cold and dead Grotesquely somber faces sink to morbid depths As reality sets in, not on their side A formidable enemy, despair is clearly there The living reminded forever of the cost of life Crushed, consumed in hellatious fear that never ends Their loved ones will never love again Slaughtered, butchered, wasted on the ground They sink with deep nausea, ugly as the blackened rocks about Perverted on the landscape, the dead stay in their place No more warmth of life to fill their needs The women weep in competition with the rain in torment Old ladies place coarse blankets on the raw dead men Too much pain fills their fragile grieving veins They sing the keening song to praise their dead Keening continues on the wind and in the rain It will never stop, never end, always the same Disconsolate depressions on the valley floor of green Wailing with great agony and screams Entered -12/05/14 Poetry Contest Name - Death Shadow Sponsored by Justin Bordner

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Date: 12/26/2014 11:13:00 PM
EARL, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda
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Date: 10/16/2014 3:13:00 AM
Hi Earl, I really enjoyed this poem. So beautifully written and so moving! Have a wonderful day! Take care. Amz
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Amy Sullivan
Date: 10/16/2014 2:42:00 PM
Hi Earl, its only a pleasure! That is so interesting, my father was of Irish descent and I too am an Irish citizen even though I live in South Africa. You definitely succeeded in capturing the essence of grief! :) Love your work!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 10/16/2014 10:44:00 AM
Hi Amy, Thank you so much. I'm glad you were touched by the poem. Normally, (if there is such a thing), I like to entertain with my works. I was interested in doing a tribute to my Irish heritage, (My mother was Irish.) I tried to capture the essence of grief in a poem. Thanks again for your kind words. Take care. Earl

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