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The Journey Begins

Debra's Doctor gives her a prognosis of Pancreatic cancer. She asked him, "How long do I have to live?" "One month was his answer!!" She is listening but she drifts in and out. In a state of shock, she cries out!! Scattered thoughts of her children, husband, parents, sisters, brothers, God!! She can't go on she feels like she has had enough!! Why me!!? she screams inside!! She is trying desperately to realize, to realize, to realize!! "Everything stops right now!! Oh my God I will die!! I'm so afraid of death!! This is not real," she shouts!! She cries, and cries!! She ask God, why, why, why? The Journey Begins!! Michael Tor 11/14/2015

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Date: 3/14/2016 9:09:00 PM
this is so sad. The journey to death. Which we are all traveling nevertheless. I enjoyed finding this oldie of yours
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:12:00 PM
Great write my friend! Sad, thats just about how it went with my brother-in-law, only he was told about 6 months. He lasted seven...... He was only 58 years old and in fine health , other than that cancer. That was only a few months ago..
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Date: 11/17/2015 11:55:00 PM
Wow Robert! I am sorry to hear of your brother-in-law. Such a tragedy so young. So much terror in our foods with the GMO's and the pesticides. No wonder it is destroying so many. It breaks my heart to read the obituary in the paper and see so many young souls leave us too early. Blessings to you and your wife Robert hope you are well my friend. Thank you for your visit.
Date: 11/15/2015 10:57:00 AM
Very good write Michael, a tough subject that hits close to home. Thanks for sharing, Pete Yuhas
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/17/2015 11:51:00 PM
Your welcome Pete. Thanks for stopping by and your thoughtful comments.
Date: 11/14/2015 10:20:00 AM
You captured the shock and sadness of this poor woman so well, Michael! Well done, and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/14/2015 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Laura. I appreciate your encouragement. Blessings your way...
Date: 11/14/2015 10:12:00 AM
Michael, this is sad, sobering, creatively penned by a friend.
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/14/2015 3:50:00 PM
Blessings your way...
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/14/2015 3:48:00 PM
Hi Iris thank you dear for your much valued comment.
Date: 11/14/2015 1:49:00 AM
yes, this is the start of a traumatic journey so superbly quilled, michael... emotional and defining!..huggs
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Date: 11/14/2015 3:48:00 PM
Thank you dear nette. How are you? Thank you for visiting. Huggs back and blessings to you.

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